Shinn! =] like him considerably more outside of the anime. First of all, angling problems: the support of the bridge for the train is off. It'd be tilted if you rotated the image so that the bridge and the ground are both level. I personally feel the blue and red streaks on the train are a bit too bright and clear and solid at the beginning point. And the way the buildings, which look rather 2D, meet the ground is kinda off too. It's tilted...The brown building and the right part of the next building w/ many windows are all at the same angle. But the left half of the plenty-window building is at a different angle--further counterclockwise (top to the left side, bottom to the right side). And the text is kinda hard to read but i don't really mind. And i love your clouds in the bg! they are soo cool ^^